I love the Bible verse on this poster, but I am not a fan of the typography that was used to put it together. There is a ton of space that could have been used to give the font breathing room but for some reason the designer decided to cram it into the center of the page. And even stranger is the fact that the designer used an excess of dividing lines and illustrations to turn the text into a box shape.  I also dislike how each word seems to be separate, even though all the words make up a sentence.  It makes the design seem broken.  I do like that the designer used the same font for the whole design but still got creative with it.  I'm not a huge fan of the colors. I like the blue and white paired with the black, but the background color just doesn't work well. To improve the design, playing around with the tracking and leading might help, giving the text breathing room by spreading it out more and getting rid of some of the illustrations that cause the text to be contained, would help a lot.