Wednesday, November 12, 2014

This is a tag that really needs some work! It looks like they just got bored and decided to use Times New Roman as the main font.  They also decided to center everything, which makes the design even more uninteresting.  The partially transparent wrapper also makes the font that has been printed on it really hard to read.  The font is also really small which doesn't help at all.  Making it better wouldn't be to hard.  Changing the wrapper so that it isn't transparent would help the font to stand out.  I like that they stuck to using just black font and letting the colors inside the jar emphasize the product instead.   If the font size was changed and it was moved around some this could be a really good design.  Changing the background for the text would help a lot.  It might look really good in pale blue.

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